I would love some feedback in regards to my story. Since it is my story, obviously I know all of
it, so if I am not describing things enough I really don’t have any idea. Are there things that you think need more
detail? Less detail? Do you feel like I am complaining? How could
I make the read more enjoyable? Do you
think I need to focus on something more specifically? Any comments would be helpful. Please know right now I am not fishing for
compliments; I really would like to get this published and I want to make sure
everything is at its best. Chapters
11-13 are new chapters so I am very aware of all the grammatical and wording
errors, which I am working on at the moment, but in terms of story please let
me know what you would like to know more about.
Thank you all so much for your help!
i'm not a great person for feedback as far as writing goes. i know nothing intelligent, lol, but i do know that i love your story and your way of writing, it pulls me in. :)
ReplyDeletelaura
Sorry, Cherish, but I don't have any constructive criticism for you; I think you're doing great. Hugs :)
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